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 * Holes-Chapter 12 ** ** January 28, 2009 **
 * This is a fiction story. The title of the book is Holes. The author is Louis Sachar. This critique is about chapter twelve, there are four pages with zero illustrations. **
 * The characters in this chapter are Stanley, Mr. Pendanski, Magnet, Squid, X-Ray, Armpit, Zigzag, Zero, and Jose. The story took place at Camp Green Lake during the day in the summer. **
 * The problem in this story is that Stanley and the other boys have to explain what there going to do with their lives once their out of Camp Green Lake. Stanley doesn’t know what he wants to do when he gets to leave so he blames his no-good-rotten-pig-stealing-great-great-grandfather for his problems. **
 * The good part of the chapter is when Stanley blames his great great grandfather for his problems because he made everyone in the room laugh even Zero smiled. Zero is the one who doesn’t talk. It’s a really good book **
 * There are really no dislikes in the chapter. Because this is a really good book. **

Holes Chapter 11 By: Tiakohl Ryane January 23, 2009 This book is called Holes this is the critique of chapter eleven. This is a fiction story written by Louis Sachar. There are four pages in this chapter with zero pictures. The characters in this chapter are X-Ray and Stanley. The story takes place in Camp Green Lake. This story takes place in the summer. The reason Stanley ended up in this Camp was because he found a pair of sneakers and they belonged to a famous baseball player. The famous baseball player donated the sneakers to an orphanage. The cops caught him with the sneakers and they thought Stanley stole them from the orphanage. Staley had to go to court the judge gave him a choice to either go to jail or Camp Green Lake. The climax of the story is when X-Ray walked up to Stanley to talk to him about finding stuff while their digging. X-Ray told him if he finds anything to give it to him instead of Mr. Pendanski. Also to give X-Ray the respect just because he thought he deserved it just cause he was there longed than everyone else. The best part of the chapter is where X-Ray calls Stanley up out of his hole to talk to him. X-Ray tells Stanley little more about him self.